Holy FRACK I love this already. An A Frame. Oh, perfection. I adore them. This is already haunting and foreboding. Him touching her shoulder. Something there is creepy.
Thanks, Bill! And it's nice to know that I'm threading that needle of "tease a bit of info, but not too much, but don't annoy readers with what you hold back"
Holy FRACK I love this already. An A Frame. Oh, perfection. I adore them. This is already haunting and foreboding. Him touching her shoulder. Something there is creepy.
Thank youuu! I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Damn, that chapter definitely hooked me. I’m amazed at how well you avoided giving up what Dad did without it feeling like you were holding back.
Thanks, Bill! And it's nice to know that I'm threading that needle of "tease a bit of info, but not too much, but don't annoy readers with what you hold back"